Comments on: Book Request Haiku

By: Charles Waters

Charles Waters — Thu, 24 Jan 2013 20:34:25 +0000

JUST FOR YOU
Feast your eyes, ears, mouth
On carnivals, edibles,
Music for your soul.

(Forget-Me-Nots)

THE DOCTOR IS IN
Afro rumbles like
black clouds thundering down for
A tomahawk dunk!

(The Rise and Rise of Julius Erving)

Debby Garfinkle — Sat, 29 Dec 2012 05:23:50 +0000

That scrotum novel.
Scrotum’s all I know. Scrotum.
Oh. Maybe an award?

(The Higher Power of Lucky)

Debby Garfinkle — Sat, 29 Dec 2012 04:45:59 +0000

It’s like Survivor.
But you don’t vote people off.
You kill other kids.

(Hunger Games)

Buffy Silverman — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 21:46:55 +0000

Amphibian pals:
One slender, sleek, and sunny;
One rough, tough, and gruff.

(Frog and Toad are Friends)

Linda Armstrong — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 15:15:58 +0000

A girl follows a
talking rabbit underground
right into magic.

(Alice in Wonderland)

janeyolen — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 14:10:56 +0000

Boy in a wolf suit
Travels to a far country.
Monsters on the loose.

Where the Wild Things Are — Sendak

Animals picnic
by the drowsy riverside.
Toad wakes them all up.

–Wind in the Willows, Grahame

Old man and his wife
Seek a furry companion–
one in a million.

Millions of Cats–Gag

Matthew Birdsall — Mon, 24 Dec 2012 15:34:52 +0000

A deadly virus
forces an epic battle:
Good versus Evil!
(The Stand – Stephen King)

Donna Miller — Fri, 21 Dec 2012 02:37:35 +0000

Great job! Love these and look forward to more – keep writing!