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Fantasy Writers (and an Editor) Speak Out
Elizabeth Knox
| Elizabeth Wein | Philip Reeve
| Kenneth Oppel | Cheryl Klein

The Dreamhunter Duet
When I was halfway through writing Dreamhunter
I realized that, for my own satisfaction, its sequel had to answer
certain questions: What is the Place? Why is it there? What are
the dreams? Also, it bothered me that I’d embarked on a story
with two species of “magic” in an otherwise very naturalistic
world: the Place, where dreamhunters go to catch their saleable
dreams, and Nown, the servant made of sand, created by a family
spell. The solution to this problem — that the Place was a
Nown — supplied answers to my questions. I decided that the
first book must end with the act that is a precondition of the whole
story. When, at the end of Dreamhunter, Laura frees her
sandman, she makes it possible for him to make his later promise:
“I promise in the future to do more, to do — I know
not what — to save whoever you love.” In trying
to keep this promise Nown’s future self creates the Place,
and dreamhunting, and Laura’s whole world.
By the time I finished writing book one, I understood
that I was writing a time travel story. I’d like to think
that Dreamquake benefited from the fact that I was part
of a project, initiated by the Royal Society, a collaboration between
writers and physicists. I wrote an SF story for that project and,
while reading about time travel and causality, I realized that I
had to decide whether the Dreamhunter Duet was a “consistent
universe” or “many timelines” story. I decided
to make it look like a consistent universe story — in which
what happens is what was always going to happen — up till
the very end.
— Elizabeth Knox
The Mark of Solomon
I really feel it’s important that each of my books stand
on its own. That’s a personal preference. Part of the problem
in writing the Mark of Solomon in general, and The Lion Hunter
in particular, was that I realized as I was writing it that it could
not be the stand-alone adventure I’d originally planned —
Telemakos himself, as a realistic character in my mind, could not
just pick up where he left off. He’d been too much altered
(and as it happens, damaged) by the events of The Sunbird
for me to blithely avoid reference to it. So I feel that The
Lion Hunter, more than my other books, is a true sequel.
The crippling injury to Telemakos’s body is a metaphor for,
and a parallel to, the crippling emotional damage he has suffered:
and, as Athena apparently “heals” him of the damage
to his body (i.e., she hides his missing arm), so she heals him
of the damage to his soul, proving the strength of love over fear,
but he has to learn to cope with his new body and soul on his own
to come full circle.
That brings me to the issue of why the Mark of Solomon
is two books rather than one. It was my editor’s idea at first,
but it actually gave me a good way to contain the themes of The
Lion Hunter within itself; The Empty Kingdom, the second book in
the Mark of Solomon sequence, is much more about adolescence than
anything else, more about Telemakos maturing in knowledge and temperament
than about healing. I resisted splitting the books at first. I hate
a cliffhanger ending (it is the chief flaw of The Empire Strikes
Back). And, while I hated the idea of writing a book that is
dependent on another, I saw that I really had two different overarching
themes here. And really the only place to split the story was at
the cliffhanger. I figured if I was going to do it, I’d better
not be wishy-washy about it, and really make it serious. My favorite
of Philip Pullman’s His Dark Materials, The Golden Compass,
is a cliffhanger (almost literally!), but it’s still got its
own interior integrity and enough closure that it could stand on
its own even without the existence of the rest of the trilogy. I
aspire to that.
— Elizabeth E. Wein
The Hungry City Chronicles
When I wrote Mortal Engines, I had no plans at all for
sequels, and tied up all the loose ends that I could see, so when
I did come to write the next book it took a lot of thought before
I found a story which would move the characters on in interesting
ways. (I started about sixteen different versions, and completed
two or three, before I came up with Predator’s Gold.)
But, being wiser by then, I allowed for the possibility of further
sequels, so Infernal Devices and the last one, A Darkling
Plain, came more easily (in fact they started as one book,
but I was having so much fun that it grew too long, and had to be
split in two). In A Darkling Plain, in particular, I quite
deliberately tried to find echoes of the first book, revisiting
some of the same places and sometimes re-using fragments of text
from Mortal Engines. It’s nice to be able to reflect
on the previous books, and spend more time with themes and characters
which maybe got skimmed over the first time through. On the other
hand, it’s important to have an ending, too, so the story
definitely finishes in A Darkling Plain.
— Philip Reeve
The Silverwing Trilogy
Many people think writing a sequel is easier than writing an original
stand-alone work.
A sequel is certainly easier in some ways — you’ve got
your world, your characters established — but it’s also
much harder. You’ve lost forever that freshness, that delight
of a new world and meeting new people. You’ve also got to
up the ante and make sure it, in some way, surpasses the original.
In an adventure story, you’ve got to make sure it’s
more exciting, more daring, more audacious, more inventive. At its
worst (as in Hollywood movies) this usually takes the form of bigger
explosions, more villains, bigger car chases — which, ironically,
doesn’t make anything better, only more tedious. The key,
I think, is a combination of inventive story and putting the character
in situations that test him or her in new and different ways.
— Kenneth Oppel
What Makes a Good Sequel?
In a planned-out trilogy or series, particularly
in fantasy, a good sequel has to accomplish many things: maintain
and grow the characters and have a good standalone plot for just
that book, while expanding the central plot of the series and raising
the stakes of the whole — and all of it should be linked to
the thematic concerns the author is trying to explore (which shouldn’t
be a rehashing of the themes from the first book).
It’s tremendously difficult to balance all
of those elements, and it requires that an author know beforehand
not only where the story is going to go but what he or she wants
it to accomplish character-, plot-, and theme-wise — all especially
hard for authors who like to see where the story takes them as they
write. But when an author can do it, as Philip Pullman or J. K.
Rowling did — well, the results speak for themselves.
— Cheryl Klein, editor at Arthur A. Levine
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the November/December 2007 issue of The Horn Book Magazine |
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