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Gary Winick’s Charlotte’s Web
by Melinda R. Cordell
The story line and characters in Charlotte’s
Web were laid out for the filmmakers like fresh linen. In White’s
classic (as we know), Fern saves a runty pig from the ax and names
him Wilbur. Wilbur is still doomed to be butchered at Christmas
until spider/excellent writer Charlotte saves his life with the
words she writes in her web. The filmmakers do stick to the main
story but chose to cut much of White’s text, replacing it
with whiz-bang Hollywood elements for emotion and laughs. In the
movie, the animals can’t just be uncivil (as they are in the
book), they must be downright rude so Wilbur has something to struggle
against; Fern can’t just love Wilbur, she must be obsessed.
The movie stays true to Charlotte’s character
and to Wilbur’s, with good vocal performances by Julia Roberts
and a gentle Dominic Scott Kay. Dakota Fanning’s Fern is a
strong, determined child, who, once in a while, talks back to her
dad, underscoring her unflinching devotion to Wilbur (if not the
movie’s unflinching devotion to the book, wherein Fern is
more respectful).
The movie’s special effects do justice to
Charlotte’s nature, focusing on realistic spider behaviors.
The web-building scenes from Charlotte’s point of view are
very effective: in certain moments, you feel as if you are
a spider. Yet for all the excellent computer animation, many of
the animal characters lack heart — until close to the end,
of course, when Charlotte’s kindness to Wilbur gets them to
see the light.
The writers could have used White’s beautifully
written text, but they rely on an annoyingly folksy narrator spouting
platitudes. Instead of quoting White’s paean to the barn (“It
smelled of the perspiration of tired horses and the wonderful sweet
breath of patient cows. It often had a sort of peaceful smell —
as though nothing bad could happen ever again in the world”),
the narrator says the barn is “just a big red barn full of
typical stuff” and that “just because it was a barn
didn’t mean it was full of life.” White disagreed, with
far more grace.
When Charlotte dies, the narrator (thankfully)
says not a word (though White’s eulogy would have been perfect).
In the next scene, however, the narrator states, “Now, that
isn’t to say that Charlotte was gone forever.” Actually,
she was. That is the point of the book: death is a true, active
part of the world. Don’t gloss over that.
The movie maintains some of the elements of White’s
book, especially the loving bond between Charlotte and Wilbur. The
screenwriters and animators give spiders and their work a lot of
respect. When the movie departs from the book, however, the writing
is derivative and trite, featuring the standard chase scenes (between
crows and Templeton) and obligatory fart jokes (four of them).
The cheap goods are disappointing because this
movie could have been great if the filmmakers had trusted the story
and its author the way Wilbur trusts Charlotte. Sadly, it seems
that White’s belief in the beauty and community of the barn
and his humane vision of life were deemed too slow and quiet for
the kind of amped-up entertainment the filmmakers thought would
sell.

Melinda
R. Cordell is a freelance children’s writer who’s
too crazy about E. B. White to let these things slide. Visit
her blog at rosefiend.livejournal.com.
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