Earlier this fall, we took a careful look at Emma and Julia Love Ballet based on Julie Danielson's recommendation.

Earlier this fall, we took a careful look at
Emma and Julia Love Ballet based on Julie Danielson's recommendation. Here's another title that Julie has high on her radar. (I hope all of you illustration-lovers follow her blog
Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast. Whenever I need in-depth information about illustrators, I try Seven Imp first. And when Jules speaks, I listen.)
Can One Balloon Make an Elephant Fly? by Dan Richards, illustrated by Jeff Newman, made an impression on me when I looked at it quickly several months back, but later when I picked it up to work on this post, I couldn't remember why.
Taking a closer look this time, I'm not in love with every decision the book creators have made, but there is one thing it does expertly: pacing.
The story starts on the endpapers, wordlessly advancing through a wordless spread to the title spread, which acts as the beginning of the conversation. "Mom?" asks a small boy (in speech balloons). "Can one balloon make an elephant fly?" Clever and concise. The boy (whose name is Evan) and his mother are at a zoo, and each has a big bunch of balloons. Why? No discernible reason except that the story wouldn't work without all those balloons.
The action hinges on a misunderstanding: the boy wonders whether a single balloon attached to an elephant could make it fly. The mother assumes he is talking about attaching a balloon to the small toy elephant we see perched on the bench between them. She is preoccupied at best, absorbed in looking at her phone. (In fact, in the first four illustrations in which she appears, she doesn't look up from the phone once.) As the book progresses, Evan attaches balloons to actual zoo animals, but she persists in attaching balloons to his toy animals, and never notices.
At the end of the book we see that all those real animals really can fly when attached to balloons, and the mother —although now fully engaged in the zoo activities and happily connecting with her son — is none the wiser.
Newman's cartoony art is drawn with confident charcoal lines and filled in with heavy darks and a few colors in a retro palette. The style bears some resemblance to early "Peanuts" comic strips by Charles Schulz, with the characters' large spherical heads and quickly drawn bodies. Any one spread seen on its own can be a puzzlement. Is that a zebra's tail or the top of a carrot? But in sequence, the story makes sense, and the animals, though quirkily drawn, are recognizable.
Overall, I think this is a fine addition to the shelves of subversive picture books — and of those that celebrate the power of imagination. I find myself underwhelmed by this book's chances at a Caldecott. But I would love to hear someone convince me otherwise.
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And thanks for taking a look at the book, Lolly!Posted : Nov 30, 2016 12:46
jules
I am behind on blog-reading but happily getting caught up on CC today. Thanks for the kind words about 7-Imp. Barb, I hadn't noticed that line. Good eye. This one is probably a long shot for the big award, but I do love Jeff's singular style. I could spot his books from outer space. One thing I have not yet done is share this with a group of children, which I'd love to do. Good to hear feedback from those who have.Posted : Nov 30, 2016 12:46
Barb Gogan
As far as Caldecott-ness goes, I was disappointed in the double-page spread where the mom is tying a balloon to the toy elephant and says See? The line of the top of the low wall goes through the upper part of the boy's body and makes him appear transparent. This is enough to knock it out of the running for me in a year when there are so many fabulous books that have been published. Am I too picky?Posted : Nov 23, 2016 03:39
Allison Grover Khoury
I like this book, and like you, I look at any book that Jules mentions. I was saddened by the cell-engaged mother at the beginning, I see that so often at parks and other places when I'm out with my children. I've just been reading it to our Kinder classes. They liked it. Not as much as some books discussed on this blog, but they did like it. They were delighted by all the animals flying away at the very end. Based on Sam's comments, I will get it into first grade before the end of my Caldecott reading program.Posted : Nov 17, 2016 05:51
Sam Juliano
I too when I first came upon this book a few months ago as I prepared my own potential Caldecott list was markedly underwhelmed. I wasn't sure whether the charcoal art or the odd inflections had instigated this conclusion, but I didn't give up on it and now am reaping considerable awards by way of appreciation. The first graders are really in love with this book. Seriously. A Bob Shea kind of love. All six classes I read it to were overcome with laughter, and they were clearly moved emotionally by this precocious little boy and his affectionate cell phone hugging mom. There is an irresistible hook to this unique take on a balloon story, and the more you look at Newman's art the more impressed you are. I hadn't thought of that Schultz connection, but that sounds very persuasive I must say. After repeated investigation (the illustration's are lovely) and experiencing firsthand how well this book works with kids, I do think it deserves to be broached in the Caldecott equation. I do also agree it is a prime candidate for that subversive picture book shelf. Wonderful assessment Lolly.Posted : Nov 16, 2016 06:29